A good idea is lost, in poor presentation.
I am not a stickler to punctuation, but its absence screams at you.
The errors, repetitions, divert you from the plot.
Sad because, I understand the effort that goes in creating a novel.
Waiting for an edited version would be a good idea, because the story line does hold a promise.
Leave your impressions here.
I am not a stickler to punctuation, but its absence screams at you.
The errors, repetitions, divert you from the plot.
Sad because, I understand the effort that goes in creating a novel.
Waiting for an edited version would be a good idea, because the story line does hold a promise.
Leave your impressions here.
Thanks for reading it and your valuable/honest input. I did send it for proofreading, but guess I also need to re-edit the manuscript through a professional editor. I'll try to do it soon.
ReplyDeleteAll the best, u have a good thing there, just needs polish, like all 'us' first timer's work.
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