Friday, 18 September 2015

Impression - The Archers Revenge by Destination Infinity

A good idea is lost, in poor presentation.

I am not a stickler to punctuation, but its absence screams at you.
The errors, repetitions, divert you from the plot.

Sad because, I understand the effort that goes in creating a novel.

Waiting for an edited version would be a good idea, because the story line does hold a promise.

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  1. Thanks for reading it and your valuable/honest input. I did send it for proofreading, but guess I also need to re-edit the manuscript through a professional editor. I'll try to do it soon.

    1. All the best, u have a good thing there, just needs polish, like all 'us' first timer's work.