Thursday, 18 February 2016

My Take- Adhira Love: Lost & Found by Aditti Gaur

The 5 star rating is on the following criteria:

  Story/Concept/Plot        * 
Characterisation          *
Language/Expression       *
Entertainment/Message     *
Publishing (job done or not)  *

Adhira Love: Lost & Found is a journal entry of a girl Riddhi or the narrator, during a very important episode in her life. The language of the entire novel is in keeping with the simple style of talking to your diary.

The entries though are about her friend Adhira who is at a very difficult juncture, where her life is on the line, her marriage in shambles. She believes it to be her responsibility to make sure, each and every person who came across her ever, has all their problems sorted and she plays important part in doing so.

In accordance with the belief,Good work always pays, Adhira gets rewarded. Romance gets very little space in the book, but one does get a glimpse of soft,wet in the rain romance and tad more.

Story brings back one's teenage fantasies, though the characters remained indiscriminate.

I found several errors in proofreading, grammar and there were incorrect use of words. A mistake that recurs throughout is beginning of sentences with And and But.A little scrutiny while editing would have helped the book a lot. So publishing misses an entire star.

On the above criteria I rate it **

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